Examiner's comment
The stem pointed students in the direction of Tesla and application of this to the question was popular with good insights into how Tesla may focus on dynamic efficiency but then, due to its dominant position, act in an inefficient manner. Unlike previous essay-based questions students were allowed to discuss other examples of monopolies and this approach was taken up as they moved on to discuss a second efficiency point, often looking at the behaviour of a natural monopoly, such as in the water industry. Students were not required to draw a diagram, but the better analytical responses often did make effective use of a precise cost and revenue diagram. The diagram in the mark scheme is for illustrative purposes and other suitable diagrams were allowed. In terms of evaluation, students did approach the question in different directions, some arguing that monopolies were inefficient and then countering this, and others vice-versa. Either approach was valid. Lastly, there were attempts at a conclusion, but this was often used to summarise points already made rather than making a clear judgement. When the latter was the focus of the conclusion, it was often done well and helped to raise the overall score. This response, whilst being knowledgeable about Tesla, lacks an effective sustained use of economic theory. Application should be anchored to knowledge and understanding, and candidates must be careful that being aware of a firm or industry in detail will not score high marks unless it is showing an ability to link knowledge and understanding in context using appropriate examples. The initial point has perhaps some isolated or imprecise understanding of specialisation and research and development, but this is at Level 1. Again, there is similar coverage of economies of scale at the end of the paragraph on the second page. The focus on infrastructure and land associated with rail being a natural monopoly displayed some elements of knowledge to get to a low Level 2 response. Likewise, the remaining analysis whilst perhaps going back over research and development does enough to lift this point to low Level 2. Lastly the attempt at evaluation makes some linkage to social efficiency. Overall, this response was awarded L2 and L1e = 5 and 1e = 6 marks. Whilst it is good to spend time on case studies looking at a specific firm, market or industry, it is essential that the focus is on showing an ability to link knowledge and understanding in context using appropriate examples. Start with the key concepts and see how they are applied to the case study you are looking at. This response starts with identifying what monopoly power is in the context of Tesla. The first part focuses on efficiency, though it is related to the UK gas and electricity distribution industry as a natural monopoly. The chain of reasoning flows well regarding productive efficiency and there is a link to the concept of productive efficiency as illustrated, although the diagram is missing the LRAC label. This paragraph secures highly at Level 3. The next paragraph attempts to evaluate by making use of x- inefficiency and the principal agent problem and is well written, securing Level 3 evaluation. The response then moves onto looking at the issue of dynamic efficiency in the context of Tesco with some attempt to link the context of Tesco lowering its average cost. Again, this was seen as a top Level 3 response in terms of Knowledge, Analysis and Application (KAA). The following section of evaluation risked being repetitive, but the point regarding diverting profits to shareholders was viewed as enough for sustained Level 3 evaluation. The conclusion adds some judgement. Overall, the response achieves L3+ for KAA (12) and L3ev (7EV) = 19 marks. Spend time planning your essay response in terms of the key points and evaluation that you want to make to avoid the risk of repetition. In terms of context, try to ensure that examples given link tightly to the economic concept you are trying to address. Remember a judgement is expected to get the very top marks for evaluation for the 25 mark questions.
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